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I am so happy that you came to me before putting this idea in as a comment. I think that an update like this would be pretty good. But it could use some editing. First of all, one pygmy couldn't pull the entire shark in. That is why when the shark passes by a fishing pygmy the pygmy gets pulled into the water. What if instead, there is a pause when the pygmy is about to get pulled in and then when it is getting pulled in, other pygmies run over to help the pygmy pull the shark out of the water and then they all eat it? Or instead of that, when the shark is underwater you can skewer it and bring the pygmies up to the islands again with the skewered shark. Then they eat it. This way you can still have the fun of the shark pulling the pygmies into the water, you can include the shark underwater, and you can do your idea. I like the flopping idea, where it flops and eats the pygmies. The thing I have a problem with is the bird carrying it. I mean, if you pull the shark out of the water and compare it to the bird, the shark is almost three times bigger than the bird. It seems kind of illogical to have the bird carry the shark if you know what I mean. I also like the idea of cooking the shark. You really did a good job thinking of this. :) Keep up the good work. If you know what I mean. ;)